"Borrowed" from InfernalMarienette
Using Blackout
[ ] They are possessed by an angel.[ ] They are possessed by a demon.[ ] They are a werewolf//vampire//faerie.[X] They are physically strong.[ ] They have a rare hair//fur colour. (All ponies have Rare hair/Fur colours? She's not neon green and bright pink, so not in that sense)
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour. (Blue isn't an unusual colour, and again, ALL ponies have weird eye colours most of the time)
[ ] This eye colour happens to be red.[ ] Their eyes change colour.[X] They have wings. (What a surprise, She's a pegasus)
[ ] They can grow extra body parts//shapeshift.[ ] They are immortal.[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. [X] They are telekinetic//pyrokinetic//etc. (
ElectroKinetic)
[ ] They have sixth sense//can mind-read//etc. [ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. [ ] They have a special ability//power, but they don't know about it yet.[X] They were bestowed//cursed with these powers. (Cursed)
[ ] They are a healer.[ ] They are from a very rich//royal family.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich//royal background.[X] They have lost one//both of their parents. (Her father died a couple of years back, it didn't change her much, but it split her family up a bit though)
[ ] They ran away from home. (She's an Adult, she's already left Home)
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.[ ] They witnessed one//both of their parent's death.[ ] They are part angel//demon//faerie//some other mythical creature. [ ] They never knew their parents.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child. [ ] They are very attractive to the same gender. [ ] They have lots of friends//no friends. [ ] They are emo/cutesy. [ ] They look much younger//older than they really are.[X] They are currently in a relationship. (With Racket - Disputable)[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. [ ] They have a mental disorder. [ ] They have an emotional disorder.[ ] They struggle to stay sane. [ ] They are a psycho.[ ] They have multiple personalities.[ ] They are very intelligent. [ ] They have hallucinations.[ ] They can summon spirits//demons//angels etc.[ ] They have an unusual//unrealistic pet. [ ] They have a guardian spirit.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.[ ] They can talk to spirits//ghosts.[ ] Some part of their body glows. [ ] They have a rare//unusual name. (Blackout Pulse, But then again, all ponies have weird names, so it isn't that rare/unusual)[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.[ ] They have a twin//sibling that they were separated from at birth//a young age. [ ] They are connected with a certain element. [ ] They are connected with a certain animal.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime//manga[ ] They are a race//species that is discriminated against//misunderstood. [ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood//feared.[ ] They live//lived on the streets at some point in their lives. [ ] They are hiding from someone//something.[ ] They have a rare blood type. [ ] They cry blood. [ ] Certain noises//smells//situations//etc. make their powers activate//give them a nervous breakdown. [ ] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'.[ ] They are very mysterious//dark. [ ] They are very lively//happy. [ ] Their mood changes a lot//very quickly.[ ] They are very patient. [ ] They are from a long line of [X] They have a piece of jewelry//clothing that they always wear. (Wristape to protect her hooves and help her grip things more easily)
[ ] They have amnesia.[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition. [ ] The have a some sort of unbeneficial curse upon them (Her "Curse" both helps and hinders here in areas, so it's more or less balanced out rather than being unbeneficial)[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.[ ] They have insomnia.Overall: 7
Point Reduction :: Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements ::[ ] They smoke. (That's Caliber, not Blackout)
[ ] They are an alcoholic. (Again, That's Caliber, not Blackout)
[ ] They are overweight. (Nope)
[ ] They are addicted to drugs. (That's Racket, not Blackout)
[X] They have a short temper. (She gets Angry Pretty easily)
[ ] They enjoy bullying others. (Nope)
[ ] They do not care much about others.[ ] They are relatively emotionless. (She's not Maude Pie)
FINAL SCORE: 6 ( Balanced Character, almost Anti-Sue )
< 05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. ( ; v ; )
06-15 :: Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue.
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
> 26 :: Mary-Sue.
Please revise your character... right now
Other Characters i Did: (But am too lazy to make a journal for all of them)
Caliber: 6 - 3 =
3 (The "Blind Gunblazing Cowboy Ex-Slaver Shade wearing Undercover Unicorn" Is not a mary sue???)
Copper: 5 - 0 =
5 (Even lower than blackout Somehow?)
Racket: 13 - 4 =
9 (I was expecting Rackets to be a lot higher)
AnaDelta: 15 - 1 =
14 (Somehow the highest)
Caramel: 7 - 0 =
7 (Pretty average score)
Xander: 8 - 0 =
8 (Average score, kind of)
Average of my characters = 7.5-ish