Mary Sue Test: Lets go with Blackout again

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"Borrowed" from InfernalMarienette
Using Blackout

[  ] They are possessed by an angel.

[  ] They are possessed by a demon.
[  ] They are a werewolf//vampire//faerie.
[X] They are physically strong.
[  ] They have a rare hair//fur colour. (All ponies have Rare hair/Fur colours? She's not neon green and bright pink, so not in that sense)
[  ] Their eyes are an unusual colour. (Blue isn't an unusual colour, and again, ALL ponies have weird eye colours most of the time)
[  ] This eye colour happens to be red.
[  ] Their eyes change colour.
[X] They have wings. (What a surprise, She's a pegasus)
[  ] They can grow extra body parts//shapeshift.
[  ] They are immortal.
[  ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
[  ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
[  ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[X] They are telekinetic//pyrokinetic//etc. (ElectroKinetic)
[  ] They have sixth sense//can mind-read//etc. 
[  ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. 
[  ] They have a special ability//power, but they don't know about it yet.
[X] They were bestowed//cursed with these powers. (Cursed)
[  ] They are a healer.
[  ] They are from a very rich//royal family.
[  ] They don't know that they are from a very rich//royal background.
[X] They have lost one//both of their parents. (Her father died a couple of years back, it didn't change her much, but it split her family up a bit though)
[  ] They ran away from home. (She's an Adult, she's already left Home)
[  ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[  ] They witnessed one//both of their parent's death.
[  ] They are part angel//demon//faerie//some other mythical creature. 
[  ] They never knew their parents.
[  ] They were abused/spoiled as a child. 
[  ] They are very attractive to the same gender.
[  ] They have lots of friends//no friends.
[  ] They are emo/cutesy. 
[  ] They look much younger//older than they really are.
[X] They are currently in a relationship. (With Racket - Disputable)
[  ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. 
[  ] They have a mental disorder. 
[  ] They have an emotional disorder.
[  ] They struggle to stay sane. 
[  ] They are a psycho.
[  ] They have multiple personalities.
[  ] They are very intelligent.
[  ] They have hallucinations.
[  ] They can summon spirits//demons//angels etc.
[  ] They have an unusual//unrealistic pet. 
[  ] They have a guardian spirit.
[  ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
[  ] Their soul is not the same as them.
[  ] They can talk to spirits//ghosts.
[  ] Some part of their body glows. 
[  ] They have a rare//unusual name. (Blackout Pulse, But then again, all ponies have weird names, so it isn't that rare/unusual)
[  ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
[  ] They have a twin//sibling that they were separated from at birth//a young age.
[  ] They are connected with a certain element. 
[  ] They are connected with a certain animal.
[  ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
[  ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime//manga
[  ] They are a race//species that is discriminated against//misunderstood.
[  ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood//feared.
[  ] They live//lived on the streets at some point in their lives. 
[  ] They are hiding from someone//something.
[  ] They have a rare blood type. 
[  ] They cry blood. 
[  ] Certain noises//smells//situations//etc. make their powers activate//give them a nervous breakdown.  
[  ] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'.
[  ] They are very mysterious//dark. 
[  ] They are very lively//happy.
[  ] Their mood changes a lot//very quickly.
[  ] They are very patient.
[  ] They are from a long line of
[X] They have a piece of jewelry//clothing that they always wear. (Wristape to protect her hooves and help her grip things more easily)
[  ] They have amnesia.
[  ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition. 
[  ] The have a some sort of unbeneficial curse upon them (Her "Curse" both helps and hinders here in areas, so it's more or less balanced out rather than being unbeneficial)
[  ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
[  ] They are 'the chosen one'.
[  ] They have insomnia.

Overall: 7


Point Reduction :: 
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements ::


[  ] They smoke. (That's Caliber, not Blackout)
[  ] They are an alcoholic. (Again, That's Caliber, not Blackout)
[  ] They are overweight. (Nope)
[  ] They are addicted to drugs. (That's Racket, not Blackout)
[X] They have a short temper. (She gets Angry Pretty easily)
[  ] They enjoy bullying others. (Nope)
[  ] They do not care much about others.
[  ] They are relatively emotionless. (She's not Maude Pie)

FINAL SCORE: 6 ( Balanced Character, almost Anti-Sue :?

< 05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. ( ; v ; )


06-15 :: Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue.
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.


> 26 :: Mary-Sue.
Please revise your character... right now

Other Characters i Did: (But am too lazy to make a journal for all of them)

Caliber: 6 - 3 = 3 (The "Blind Gunblazing Cowboy Ex-Slaver Shade wearing Undercover Unicorn" Is not a mary sue???)
Copper: 5 - 0 = 5 (Even lower than blackout Somehow?)
Racket: 13 - 4 = 9 (I was expecting Rackets to be a lot higher)
AnaDelta: 15 - 1 = 14 (Somehow the highest)
Caramel: 7 - 0 = 7 (Pretty average score)
Xander: 8 - 0 = 8 (Average score, kind of)

Average of my characters = 7.5-ish

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KYR-R33VY's avatar
i would do this but i am like, tired as heck

remind me tommorow and i will :'D